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Now Before You Read any Further…

 

Stop.


Not for long.


There is still one hell of a chapter left for the last 32 posts you have just read, and I have absolutely no intention of keeping it from you. That would just be cruel, manipulative and, depending upon where you came across this book, possibly a breach of consumer law.


But we need to discuss something.


Reviews.






Yes.


Those damned review things. 


Thirty two posts later, if you have made it this far, you have spent a considerable amount of time with Localad, Marjory, Desmond, Priya, Brick Holland and the inhabitants of Meridian Cove. You have just survived Hollywood executives, lawyers, contracts, literary prizes, explosions, independent booksellers and meetings attended by people who possessed several notebooks but apparently no actual opinions.


You are therefore more than qualified.


More qualified, frankly, than some professional critics.


So, before witnessing the final chapter of this story's success, I would like to ask you to please consider leaving this book an honest review.


It doesn't have to be an essay.


Five stars and “Quite good, actually” would be perfectly acceptable.


Five stars and “Changed my understanding of the human condition” would also be acceptable, although perhaps difficult to defend under cross-examination.


Four stars will be tolerated in good faith.


Three stars will be investigated.


Two stars will cause Marjory to sigh most disappointedly in your general direction and could even set Mrs. Alvarez off.


One star and Priya (the lawyer not the other one) will be in touch.


Of course, this is not a threat.


Priya has specifically advised me to make that clear, although Jasmine does carry a sword.


But the truth is much simpler.


Reviews are what help books like this get noticed. They help complete strangers decide whether to take a chance on a story they have never heard of, written by someone they have never met. And sometimes that stranger tells another stranger.


And another.


And suddenly a small book like this isn't quite so small anymore.


Which, when you think about it, is rather appropriate. Considering how this particular story went.


So, if this story has made you laugh, think, swear at Hollywood, become emotionally attached to a fictional bookshop, or simply postpone something more responsible, please leave a review wherever you found it.


It would mean an enormous amount.


Thank you. And go tell ten to tell ten, to tell ten. That's the way to do it.


Right.


The absolutely humiliating begging portion of this programme is now concluded and we look forward to hearing what you think.


Thanks again in advance. Ta ta for now.



 

Chapter Thirty-Two:  The Final Page

 

Sitting peacefully in his busy bookstore, Localad begins writing his next novel, knowing his first story had fully survived the machine.





Autumn turned to winter, and winter, in the particular slow rhythm of Meridian Cove, turned eventually back to spring, and Harbour & Page Booksellers stayed open through all of it, its shelves a little fuller than they'd been two years earlier, its cracked bell finally, at Marjory's quiet insistence, replaced with a new one that rang clean and bright every time the door opened, though Localad found, in the weeks after the replacement, that he missed the old broken sound more than he expected to, and kept the cracked bell anyway, hung now on a nail behind the register, a small, private reminder of everything the shop had survived to get here.


“You asked me to fix the old bell for years,” Marjory said.


“I was preserving its voice.”


“You were procrastinating.”


“Those are neighbouring arts.”


Purradise had ceased being a phenomenon and become something better too. It became a book in its own right. People discovered it after the noise had moved elsewhere. Booksellers recommended it. Readers lent it, failed to get it back and bought another copy. Its pages softened. Its covers bent. Sentences were underlined by strangers Localad would never meet.


Purradise had settled, by then, into a steady, unspectacular, entirely sustainable life as a genuine literary success. Not a phenomenon anymore, not a viral sensation, simply a well-loved book that continued to sell, quietly, print run after print run, to readers who found it through word of mouth or through a bookseller's recommendation or, occasionally, through the lingering long tail of a film adaptation that had, itself, faded almost entirely from public conversation, remembered now mostly as a footnote in articles about the book that had outlasted it. The film had faded now into streaming menus under the category BECAUSE YOU PREVIOUSLY WATCHED SOMETHING WITH SWORDS.


Harbour & Page prospered modestly.


Modest prosperity suited the shop. Real wealth would have made it nervous.


The roof no longer leaked. The heating worked in three of the four corners. The History shelf had been reinforced in a manner that respected both engineering and ideology.


Localad had started something new. He hadn't told anyone yet, not even Marjory, exactly what it was about, a habit he'd learned, this time, from experience, understanding now that a story needed its own quiet, private space to grow before it was ready for anyone else's opinions, even well-meaning ones.


At seven each morning, before the town had fully assembled itself, Localad made coffee in his grandmother’s chipped press pot and opened a fresh notebook.


Marjory, respected his boundaries while objecting to them recreationally.


He wrote it the same way he'd written Purradise, twenty years earlier and then again, more urgently, in the two years before Desmond Ferris's car broke down outside his window: in the quiet hour before the shop opened, coffee brewing in his grandmother's chipped press pot, note book open on the counter, no one watching, no notes to satisfy, no deadline dictated by anyone's marketing calendar.


He glanced up, one morning in early spring, from the page he was working on, and looked around the shop — the shelves he'd restocked himself, the New Releases table where his own book still held a place of honour beside newer arrivals, the reading chair by the window where a stranger had once sat down and read three chapters without looking up, the small hand-painted sign in the window that still read, beneath the shop's restored name, HOME OF PURRADISE. And he felt something settle over him that he recognized, after a moment, as simple, uncomplicated contentment, a feeling he had spent most of the last two years too busy or too frightened or too far from home to properly notice.


Marjory came in a few minutes later, letting the new bell ring its clean, bright note, carrying two coffees from the diner because the shop's own coffee, she liked to say, was an acquired taste she'd acquired decades ago and had no plans to inflict on herself before nine in the morning.


"How's the new one coming?" she asked, setting one coffee down beside his note book, careful not to look directly at the page, because she had learned, over the years, exactly how much space he needed before a story was ready to be read by anyone else.


"Slowly," he said. "Which I think means it's coming along exactly right."


“Good slowly or avoiding-the-ending-for-two-decades slowly?”


“Good slowly.”


She sat in the reading chair by the window.


The same chair Desmond had once occupied. The same window through which Localad had watched the car die and his old life begin making other arrangements.


"So what’s this new epic drama called?” she asked without looking at his page.


Localad considered refusing an answer.


Instead, he turned the notebook slightly toward himself, protecting the sentence while allowing the title to remain visible.


‘The Book of CAT’


Marjory read it.


“Singular cat?”


“For now, but there will be more. A whole clutter or clowder of them.”


“Will there be a film?”


“Absolutely not.”


“You said that very quickly.”


“I’m growing. And I’m deliberately writing out all possibility of any cinematic release.”


What's it about then?"


He considered the question, turning his pen over in his hand, looking out the shop's front window at the Harbour beyond it, boats knocking gently against the pilings, the tide coming in the way it always did, indifferent and constant and, somehow, exactly the amount of company he needed on a morning like this one.


"I'm still finding out, but there will be a lot of water in it" he said, which was true, and which was, he had come to understand, the only honest answer a person could give about a story still being written, still being protected, still being allowed to become entirely and only itself before the rest of the world got a chance to have an opinion about it.


He picked up his pen, and Marjory settled back into the reading chair by the window with her coffee and a paperback of her own.


The new bell rang as Mr. Okafor entered for his morning newspaper.


Mrs. Alvarez followed with a tray of butter croissants and a freshly cut rumour about the mayor, both of uncertain structural integrity.


The shop slowly filled.


Localad closed his new notebook, served his customers and repaired a child’s wooden boat with just a strip of sellotape and a sheet of card.


At nine-thirty, when the brief rush of trade had passed, he reopened the notebook.


In the new story, a fresh lead, Jasper-Cat, stood at the edge of a world that had been told too many times what shape it ought to take.


The cat considered this world.


This newly created world, having met cats before, became nervous.


Localad smiled and wrote his next sentence.


He did not know whether it was going to be any good yet.


But this no longer frightened him.


Outside, the tide came in without asking permission. Inside, Harbour & Page held its books, its people and its repaired punctuation. Marjory read by the window. The old bell hung behind the counter, cracked but more or less complete.


Purradise had survived the machine. More importantly, so had Localad. And so would what was coming.


And now, with no studios waiting, no market notes arriving and no one telling him how loudly the ending ought to explode, he began working on the next true thing.


The town of Meridian Cove went on with its quiet morning, unaware and completely unbothered, the way it always had been, of just how far one of its own had travelled, and how good it felt, finally, to be back home, writing the next true thing, one honest page at a time.


The Book of CAT. Could it really be the next big thing?


THE END


 

Chapter Thirty-One:  The Award Night

 

Localad wins the literary prize, delivering a powerful acceptance speech about protecting creator rights.





The Literary Foundation's Annual Calder Award Ceremony was held in a hotel ballroom in the city two hours inland of the book store. It was considerably smaller and quieter than the somewhat overpowering red-carpet premiere Localad had attended a year and a half earlier. There were no photographers calling out names at the door, no velvet ropes, no marquee with anyone's face on it at all. It was just a room full of writers, editors, booksellers, and readers, several hundred people who had, in one way or another, given their working lives to books.


Tonight, the carpet contained a pattern apparently designed to conceal both spilt wine and existential collapse. There was no red carpet, no screaming photographers and no enormous poster of Brick Holland staring toward a horizon he intended to punch.


Localad found, walking into that room in a suit he had chosen and bought himself, that he felt more at ease than he had at any point during the entire, glittering, exhausting Hollywood chapter of his life.


He felt immediately at home.


This room was all about books: and people whose formal clothes looked borrowed from the more confident versions of themselves.


Marjory sat beside him at a round table near the front, along with Priya, who had flown out specifically for the occasion and had brought, unexpectedly, a bottle of champagne she'd been saving, she said, "for exactly this kind of night." A bottle of champagne and a folder, because she did not trust celebration unaccompanied by documentation.


And there was Mrs. Alvarez and Mr. Okafor, who had driven the two hours together and had spent the entire ride, according to Mrs. Alvarez's own cheerful report, arguing about whether the diner should stay open late to celebrate if Localad won.


Mrs. Alvarez wore sequins and informed three finalists that Localad had once repaired her toaster.


Mr. Okafor wore a dark suit and the expression of a man prepared to witness history without inconveniencing it.


Localad won.


His name was called.


For several seconds he remained seated because the name belonged to an author and his body had not been informed that this now included him.


Marjory squeezed his arm.


“Stand up.”


He did.


The moment itself passed strangely, the way Localad imagined most such moments must pass for everyone who experienced them. A name being called, his own name, a beat of disbelief before his body remembered how to stand, applause that felt both enormous and somehow very far away, Marjory's hand gripping his arm for one brief second before he had to let go of her to walk to the stage.


He had written a speech, of sorts, three different drafts of it sitting folded in his jacket pocket, and standing at the podium under lights considerably gentler than a soundstage's, he found that none of the drafts felt right, and he set them all aside and spoke, instead, from the same place he'd been speaking from since the very beginning of all of this. Plainly, honestly, without polish, the way he'd learned to write only after twenty years of trying to write some other, fancier ways first.


At the podium he unfolded his speech, looked at it and placed it aside.


"I wrote this book at a counter in a bookstore that was, for a long time, failing," he began. “Mostly before opening, because fear is easier to manage before customers arrive.”


The room laughed.


 “I wrote it for twenty years. This was not discipline. Well, some of it was discipline. But a considerable portion was avoidance with stationery.”


He spoke about the bad novel that had made him angry enough to finish. About Marjory telling him courage was doing the thing while frightened. About selling the film rights and paying the debt that would have closed Harbour & Page.


"I wrote it because I was angry at a bad novel I'd read, and because I was scared of finishing something that might turn out to not be good enough, and because a friend of mine told me once that being brave doesn't mean not being scared. it means doing the thing anyway, while scared. I sold the film rights to this book eighteen months ago, and I want to say, honestly, that I don't regret that decision. I don’t regret taking the money. It paid off a debt that would most certainly have closed my family's shop. It's not a story where the money was the villain. The villain, if there was one, was believing gratitude required agreement. For a while, every note arrived wrapped in praise, and I treated the praise as a debt. I thought saying no would make me difficult, unprofessional or ungrateful.”


He found Desmond’s face in memory, Trent’s conference room, Priya’s clauses, Brick’s unexpected kindness and the film’s enormous artificial sky.


“A story can survive many changes,” he continued. “But every story has a few things that are not decoration. They are load-bearing truths. You are allowed to know what they are. You are allowed to protect them. And you should decide before the room becomes expensive and everyone in it tells you that surrender is collaboration.”


The room was silent.


He paused, finding Marjory's face in the crowd, steadying himself against it before he continued.


“My three things were Jasmine, the sword and the Wound staying open. It took me far too long to understand that the third thing was also about me.”


He lifted the glass award.


It isn't the same thing. I learned that the hard way, and I'm standing here tonight holding this award because, eventually, I learned it in time to do something about it. To every writer in this room who has a story that someone with more money than you is asking you to make louder, smaller, faster, easier to sell in fifteen seconds, I'd just ask you to remember that you're allowed to know which three things matter most, and to protect them, even when protecting them costs you something you thought you couldn't live without. I promise you, you can live without it. What you can't live without is the story being actually, truly yours, all the way to the end."


The applause that followed lasted longer than Localad expected, and he stood at the podium holding the award, a simple glass plaque, considerably less ostentatious than anything he'd seen handed out at the film's premiere a year and a half earlier, and, to him, immeasurably more valuable. It did not shake walls or generate content. But it meant more.


Localad thought, with a clarity that felt like the culmination of everything he'd been through since a stranger's car broke down outside his shop, that he had never once, in this entire strange and difficult journey, felt more certain that he had made the right choice than he did in this exact moment.


The applause rose for one last time.


Afterward, Priya opened the champagne.


Mrs. Alvarez, famed for her poise, tact and diplomacy, drank from the award because she mistook it for a strangely shaped glass.


Mr. Okafor shook Localad’s hand twice.


Marjory kissed him where everyone could see.


For once, Localad did not become embarrassed.


He had spent much of his life imagining himself being grand in secret. Standing in that modest ballroom, holding an award for the quiet ending he had nearly been afraid to write, he finally understood that grandeur was not being watched by everyone.


It was about knowing what you had done when the room went quiet.




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Chapter Thirty: Standing Tall

 

Chapter Thirty:  Standing Tall

 

Localad turns down millions, choosing his own artistic independence over Hollywood fame.





Localad’s latest refusal had made its way, eventually, into the same industry newsletters that had once covered the film's disappointing opening weekend, framed this time, more as a curiosity.


The industry reported Localad’s refusal as though he had recently declined the presence of gravity.


SELF-PUBLISHED AUTHOR REJECTS MILLIONS!


PURRADISE CREATOR WALKS AWAY FROM FRANCHISE!


AUTHOR TURNS DOWN STUDIO SEQUEL DEAL, CITES ARTISTIC INDEPENDENCE!


ONE MAN SAYS NO TO HOLLYWOOD!


This final headline was totally inaccurate. Many people had said no to Hollywood. Most of them simply did not receive a full-on press release immediately afterward.


Customers arrived at the store to congratulate him on his immense courage. Some even asked whether he had lost his mind. Several actually managed both in the same sentence.


Mrs. Alvarez placed the article beside the till and then charged tourists fifty cents each to hear “the real story,” which somehow contained three invented helicopters and a fistfight in the studio lobby.


“There was no fistfight,” Localad said.


“Not with that attitude.”


"And helicopters?"


Localad found, reading the coverage from behind his own counter weeks later, that he felt almost nothing about it at all, no vindication, no regret, simply the quiet, settled satisfaction of a decision he had already made peace with, before anyone else had a chance to weigh in on it.


Marjory asked him about it only once, directly, on a walk along the harbour one evening in early autumn, the same walk Localad used to take alone after closing the shop, back before any of this had happened, back when Purradise was still a secret he kept from the whole town except for the woman walking beside him right now.


"Do you ever think about the money?" she asked. "Not to second-guess you. I'm just curious whether it's a clean no, or whether some part of you still turns it over."


He considered the question honestly, the way he tried to consider most things she asked him, because she had a talent for asking the version of a question that actually needed answering rather than the version that was easy to answer politely.


"I think about it sometimes," he admitted. "Not the way you'd expect, though. I don't think about what I'd do with the money. I think about the version of me who took the first deal, eighteen months ago, sitting on that box of paperbacks in the back room, and how certain he was that the money was the whole point, the only point, the thing that would finally prove the book, and by extension, himself to be worth something. I feel for that version of me. I don't think he was wrong to say yes. I just think he didn't yet know what saying yes was going to cost."


"And now?"


"Now I know the cost," he said. "And knowing it, this offer wasn't actually that hard to say no to. I already have the thing the money was supposed to buy me. I have proof the story matters. It's sitting on my own shelves, in my own words, selling to people who found it themselves because they wanted to, not because a trailer told them to. That's worth more to me than another six figures in the bank and another eighteen months of somebody else deciding how loud my ending gets to be. Now the book matters without needing me to sell it again.” 


“That isn’t what I asked.”


He smiled. Marjory did not allow emotional answers to disguise themselves as literary criticism.


“Yes,” he said. “Sometimes I imagine the roof being fully repaired, the accounts being full, never worrying again. Then I remember the eighteen months of meetings explaining why a quiet scene should remain quiet. That’s when the money stops looking free.”


They walked in silence for a while after that, past the same boats knocking against the same pilings, past the diner with its flickering neon signage, and Marjory slipped her hand into his without either of them making any particular announcement of the gesture, the way two people do when a thing has been true for a while before either of them found the moment to say so out loud.


“I don’t regret the first deal,” Localad said. “It saved the shop. It also taught me the cost. I needed both truths.”


"For what it's worth," she said eventually, "I think Purradise is all the better for it. The whole world you built. I think it needed you to be the kind of person who could say no to that offer, or it wouldn't have deserved the ending you gave it in the first place."


“That sounds suspiciously profound.”


“Don’t spread it around.”


"It's a very generous way of saying I'm stubborn."


"You are stubborn," she agreed. "It's one of my favourite things about you. It's also, apparently, the thing that saved your book."


He laughed at that, the easy, unguarded laugh that had become more frequent in the months since he'd come home, and they walked the rest of the way back to the book store together, in the particular, comfortable quiet of two people who no longer needed to fill every silence with something, because the silence itself, at last, felt like more than enough.


They stopped outside Harbour & Page.


The store's newly restored sign moved gently above them. Inside, the shelves waited in the dark, holding thousands of endings that had all refused sequels for a lot less.


Localad turned to Marjory.


“I love you,” he said.


The three  little words arrived flawlessly without any prior rehearsal and therefore survived the situation.


Marjory looked at him for a long moment.


“I know,” she said.


“That seems unfairly brief.”


“I’ve known since 1998. I’m exhausted.”


Then she kissed him.


The cracked bell, stirred by the door behind them, gave one small broken note.


It had none of the grand, polished, and emotional qualities of a professional movie sceen.


No harbour fireworks began. Nobody applauded except for Mrs. Alvarez, who had been locking the diner and considered privacy an urban myth.


It was better than cinematic.


It was truth.




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Chapter Twenty-nine:  The Confrontation

 

The original producer visits Localad’s small town, begging him to write a movie sequel to help save the franchise.





Desmond came back to Meridian Cove one day in the late summer and this time his car did not break down.


Localad regarded this as somewhat suspicious.


He was coming, completely unannounced except for a text message sent that morning.  Hey, I'm in the area, can I stop by, no agenda, I promise. And Localad, watching the same rental sedan model pull up outside the shop that had once delivered a stranger into his life eighteen months earlier, felt a strange, looping sense of déjà vu that he didn't fully shake even after Desmond had parked, gotten out, and walked through the shop's cracked door-bell entrance, this time without any car trouble.


Desmond entered Harbour & Page, and the cracked bell produced the same metallic collapse that had first introduced him eighteen months earlier.


“You still haven’t fixed that bell?”


“It has representation now.”


Desmond sat in the reading chair by the window.


He looked older this time. Not dramatically older; Hollywood forbids visible time without negotiation. But the smoothness had worn thin. He seemed less like a producer arriving in and commanding a room and more like a man who had driven a long way to say something pretty difficult.


"Confession time. I do have an agenda," Desmond admitted, within the first five minutes, sitting in the same reading chair by the window where he'd once devoured the first three chapters of Localad's manuscript in under an hour. "I lied in the text. I'm sorry. I wanted to see you in person before I said this, and I wanted to say it without Priya or the legal department drafting the words for me first."


“Well that simplifies the trust portion of the meeting. Go ahead.”


Desmond smiled, then stopped smiling.


“The studio wants a sequel.”


Localad said nothing.


"They want to do a sequel," Desmond said. "Not the sequel Trent originally planned. That one's well gone, dead and buried, box office didn't support it, everyone's moved on. This one would be completely different. Smaller budget. And they want—" he paused, choosing his next words with visible care, "they want you to write it. Not co-write. Write it. Start to finish. First-position credit, creative control clauses that would actually mean something this time, final cut on the ending, no restraint clause on this contract, none at all. I fought for every one of those terms myself, because I think, finally, I understand what it actually costs to not fight for them."


Localad looked at him for a long moment, weighing the offer against everything it represented. Not merely money, though the number Desmond eventually named was, again, substantial, but a real chance, framed carefully as an act of contrition, to go back into the machine that had once taken his story apart and rebuild something closer to what he'd actually meant, this time with the protections he hadn't known to ask for the first time around.


“What do you think? Smaller budget. You write it alone. First-position credit. Meaningful creative control. Final authority over the ending. No non-disparagement clause. Publishing rights untouched. Priya can rewrite the protections herself if she likes.”


“I’m sure she would like.”


“I know.”


Desmond restated the fee.


"Why now?" Localad asked. "Why this offer, after everything we’ve already been through?"


"Because the numbers on your book keep climbing, and the studio's finally noticed that the story people actually want more of is the one you wrote, not the one we made," Desmond said, with a bluntness that Localad, at least, appreciated. "And because I've spent eighteen months watching what happened to you, and to it, and I don't want to be part of doing that to anyone ever again, including you. I'm not going to pretend the studio's motives are purely artistic. They're not. They’re in it for the money. But my offer to fight for your terms this time, for real, isn't a marketing calculation. That part's just me, trying to fix something I helped break."


The old Localad would have heard salvation. The newer one just heard the word ‘terms’.


“Why?” he asked.


“Because your book keeps selling and the film has become nothing more than the answer to trivia questions.” Desmond looked down at his hands. “And because I helped take something true and teach it to lie loudly.”


The shop settled around them.


“I told myself I was protecting the project,” Desmond continued. “Then I told myself I was protecting your credit. Then I told myself I was protecting my ability to help later. There is always a noble explanation available when cowardice has an expense account.”


Localad had never heard Desmond speak without managing the room before.


“I’m not asking you to absolve me,” Desmond said. “I’m asking whether you’d consider coming back under terms that prevent what happened the last time.”


Localad considered it.


He imagined the knights being restored. Jasmine central. Purradise on screen with its old strangeness intact: mountains singing slightly flat, cats refusing prophecy on grammatical grounds, the Wound remaining open because closure was not the same as healing.


He thought about it quite seriously. More seriously, he suspected, than Desmond had expected him to, weighing the shape of a sequel that might actually honour the real story and an ending that stayed quiet because the contract finally said it could. He thought about how satisfying it might feel to walk back into that glass-walled conference room not as a nervous first-timer with no leverage, but as a bestselling, award-shortlisted author whose name now meant something the studio actually needed.


And then he thought about the shop, and the book’s twentieth-print run stacked by the window, and Marjory's hand-painted sign, and the letter from the literary foundation still pinned to the bulletin board behind the register, and about how it had taken him eighteen months of losing almost everything to fully understand what actually mattered to him, and about how easy it would be, holding an offer this good, to convince himself that this time would be different simply because he wanted it to be.


The fantasy was satisfying. That was why it required caution.


“You fought for all these terms?” Localad asked.


“Yes.”


“Why?”


“Because I wanted to prove I’m not the man I was.”


Localad nodded. “That’s not a good reason to make a film.”


Desmond looked startled, then gave a tired laugh.


“No. It isn’t.”


“Listen, I believe you mean the apology. I believe you really fought. But I don’t want to write a sequel.”


“Can I ask why?”


“Because Purradise is finished.”


Desmond waited for more.


There was no more. 


The sentence stood in the room with the quiet authority of a locked door.


"I appreciate the offer," he said, finally. "I mean that completely, Desmond. I believe you fought for those terms. I believe you mean what you're saying about wanting to fix something. But I don't want to write the sequel."


"Can I ask why?"


“I spent twenty years not finishing Purradise,” Localad said. “Then everyone spent eighteen months trying to persuade me the ending I finally got to, was just a starting point for something more profitable. It isn’t. It’s the end. Because I’ve already told the story I wanted to tell," Localad said. "I told it completely, exactly the way I meant it, and it's sitting on my own shelves right now, unedited, uncompromised, doing better than either of us predicted it ever would do. I really don't need a sequel to prove anything to anyone anymore. I think I'd rather write something new."


Desmond looked toward the shelves of black-covered books.


“What will you write?”


“Something else.”


“Do you know what?”


“Not yet. But I’ll bet the studio wouldn’t touch it,” he smiled.


Desmond stood.


At the counter he paused beside Localad’s father’s photograph.


“For what it’s worth,” he said, “the first three chapters of your book, were still the best hour I’ve ever had reading anything in twenty years.”


Localad believed him.


They shook hands.


“Call me if you change your mind.”


Desmond then left without a book, a contract or a rescued franchise.


He left with something less marketable and more useful: a refusal he had actually earned.




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